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Jun 11Liked by Abram Dress

Something I could legitimately see happening in Boulder County... :)

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Ha! I must admit, being so close to the Boulder metaphysical scene may have impacted this story. You know it's based on true events, right?

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For real? Someone shot an intruder while meditating?

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No, I totally lied. 😁

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Jun 13Liked by Abram Dress

Damn you writers!

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Good times, you sick @#$@#! ;)

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Ha! I thought this was one of my most tame stories!

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Apr 4Liked by Abram Dress

I've never written flash fiction and haven't read much of it, so I enjoyed delving into this and seeing how you played with such a range of interiority and went from very light to very dark content in such a short span of time. Nice work!

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Thank you, Beth! Yeah, it's a fun and low-stakes writing style.

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Apr 1Liked by Abram Dress

I love this story!! My favorite line: The shadows flowed through her blood, and she focused on the expansion of her chest.

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So glad you like it, Kym!

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